Wow, what a great job you have done with this story Poppy! You have obviously put a lot of time and effort into it and it shows. Great creativity and imagination. You use dialogue well and have sectioned the writing appropriately into chapters. Some great description and mood building too. Ka pai!
Wow, what a great job you have done with this story Poppy! You have obviously put a lot of time and effort into it and it shows. Great creativity and imagination. You use dialogue well and have sectioned the writing appropriately into chapters. Some great description and mood building too. Ka pai!
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