I was a student at Owairaka District School.
Kia ora Poppy. Great story with lots of vivid imagery and description and a fun little twist at the end. I really like the 'Candy filled almost to the brim of our pillowcases' sentence. I get a real image of it in my mind. Keep up the awesome work!
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Kia ora Poppy. Great story with lots of vivid imagery and description and a fun little twist at the end. I really like the 'Candy filled almost to the brim of our pillowcases' sentence. I get a real image of it in my mind. Keep up the awesome work!
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