Hey Bloggers! Poppy here and here is my daily slide about past and future volcanoes! Hope you like it! What do you think is the most coolest volcano? Blog ya later! Poppy.
Kia ora Poppy, thank you for sharing your writing with us. Great visual to match your poem on Slide 6! I can see you have thought carefully about what words to use, I particularly like your first line: Hot lava splurts out" - splurts is a great word! Do you enjoy writing poetry or prefer story writing? Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
Kia ora Poppy. Great work with your haiku - you perfected the 5-7-5 syllable structure. Maybe you could try making haikus about other things now or even for people you know?
Kia Ora Miss O'shea! I appreciate you for commenting on my post! Yes, that sounds like a great idea! I will definitely get to that in my free time. Have you ever made a Haiku? Blog you later, Poppy.
Hi Poppy, love your volcano haiku, always good to hear the author read it themselves as well because they know which words to emphasise.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Poppy, thank you for sharing your writing with us. Great visual to match your poem on Slide 6! I can see you have thought carefully about what words to use, I particularly like your first line: Hot lava splurts out" - splurts is a great word! Do you enjoy writing poetry or prefer story writing?
ReplyDeleteKia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
Kia ora Poppy. Great work with your haiku - you perfected the 5-7-5 syllable structure. Maybe you could try making haikus about other things now or even for people you know?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Miss O'shea! I appreciate you for commenting on my post! Yes, that sounds like a great idea! I will definitely get to that in my free time. Have you ever made a Haiku? Blog you later, Poppy.
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