Hey fellow bloggers! How has your day been going so far? Poppy here and today's volcano task for Room 6 is I had to make a (fake) news artical about a volcanic eruption! Hope you like it! What is the most tallest volcano? Comment it! Stay safe! Poppy.
Kia ora Poppy. Great work on your newspaper article about a (fake) volcanic eruption. You have structured the story well using the triangle planner and have added in a great hook intro and interesting details. Next step would be to add in some more scientific information to make it seem more like a real event rather than a story. Awesome work.
ReplyDeleteMorena Poppy, thank you for sharing your writing with us. I'm glad everyone got to safety! Great placement of the photo of Grace - just like a real news story in the newspaper or on the TV news.
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Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
Hi Poppy, you have used great language in your report and made sure you have sequenced it well so that the reader is engaged with what is happening. Good work!
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