Soon, I was getting way too tired of swimming so I floated on my back to relax. But.. as I layed there, I heard a big swishing sound under me. I was a shark! It’s fin poking out of the deep water was as sharp as a blade. I quickly covered myself in seaweed to be camouflage. Then it went away. “Blugh!” I said as I took the seaweed off me.
“There he is!” It's Rainbow! He swam around me joyfully. And we swam together for a bit until I called my friend's yacht to pick me up. That was the best adventure I have ever had. The End
Hey Poppy, Mackenzie here. I loved your writing!!! It made cool pictures in my head and when you said about the fish called rainbow (in my head it looked like the rainbow fish you know on story line online.) This is so adventurous. I also liked how you said " He looked like a big blob and was a yellow as a minion" And also how you said " The sharks fin was a sharp as a blade. I could name way more things of I had time!! What is your favorite the sharks fin was as sharp as a blade. Or It looked as yellow as a minion? My favorite is the as yellow as a minion. Blog Ya Later And come cheek out my blog. Have a great day!
ReplyDeleteHey Mackenzie!🍋🐕🐈🐴 Thanks for commenting on my blog!!! I think I would go for as yellow as a minion too. Would you rather be able to fly? Or be invisible? You have a great day too!
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