Kia Ora Poppy, my name is Helen and I'm from Room 23 at Owairaka District School. I really like your Poem called " I am Poppy". I also like the way that you added a question to make it more interesting, my favourite animal is a puppy. I remember doing something similar to this, I made a limerick but I did not put it on my blog. To improve you could put the description on the top. Did you enjoy making this? Do you want to do this again?
Thanks for sharing your learning. You can go to my blog by clicking here. Blog you later, Helen.
Kia Ora Poppy. My name is Titan from Room 23. I enjoyed the part when you said "I am a soccer player". This brought me back when I use to play soccer. Next time, you could include more information just to make it a bit more interesting. How good are you at soccer?. Thanks for sharing your learning. You should check out my blog. My blog. Blog you later, Titan.
Hello Poppy it is me Kezia here and I love your I am poem because I didn't no that you wanted to be a doctor, But it is great that you to help people. I remember when I did a I am poem, it was so much fun. did you have fun making it? thanks for posting and Blog you later Kezia
Kia ora Poppy, I am Rosie from St Marys, What a awesome poem. Maybe next time you could make you writing a bit bigger. I like all the colours you used. My favourite animal is a dog because they are so playful and fun, I have a dog and she loves to go for walks. If you could have a pet what would it be? Good Bye, Rosie.
Kia Ora Poppy, my name is Helen and I'm from Room 23 at Owairaka District School. I really like your Poem called " I am Poppy". I also like the way that you added a question to make it more interesting, my favourite animal is a puppy. I remember doing something similar to this, I made a limerick but I did not put it on my blog. To improve you could put the description on the top. Did you enjoy making this? Do you want to do this again?
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your learning. You can go to my blog by clicking here.
Blog you later,
Helen.
Kia Ora Poppy. My name is Titan from Room 23. I enjoyed the part when you said "I am a soccer player". This brought me back when I use to play soccer. Next time, you could include more information just to make it a bit more interesting. How good are you at soccer?.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your learning. You should check out my blog.
My blog.
Blog you later,
Titan.
Hello Poppy it is me Kezia here and I love your I am poem because I didn't no that you wanted to be a doctor, But it is great that you to help people.
ReplyDeleteI remember when I did a I am poem, it was so much fun.
did you have fun making it?
thanks for posting and
Blog you later
Kezia
Kia ora Poppy,
ReplyDeleteI am Rosie from St Marys, What a awesome poem. Maybe next time you could make you writing a bit bigger. I like all the colours you used. My favourite animal is a dog because they are so playful and fun, I have a dog and she loves to go for walks. If you could have a pet what would it be?
Good Bye,
Rosie.