Kia ora Poppy! Ka pai finishing off your similes, they are such a great language feature to add into your writing. Next time when you are using 'like' in a simile it doesn't need to have the 'is' in front of it. For example, her cheeks were red like a rose. Keep up the active blogging! NJ
Hello Poppy. I love it, just like a poem. I would prefer it maybe if you made it rhyme. Check out my blog at https://saintmarysgisaedanl.blogspot.com/.
Kia ora Poppy!
ReplyDeleteKa pai finishing off your similes, they are such a great language feature to add into your writing. Next time when you are using 'like' in a simile it doesn't need to have the 'is' in front of it. For example, her cheeks were red like a rose.
Keep up the active blogging!
NJ
Hello Poppy. I love it, just like a poem. I would prefer it maybe if you made it rhyme. Check out my blog at https://saintmarysgisaedanl.blogspot.com/.
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