Wednesday, 6 May 2020

My Limerick poem!

once there was a bee called Bings, 

who wanted to try out her wings,

she got hit by a rock,

fell in a sock,

and gave the foot two big stings!

 

3 comments:

  1. Wow that was quick Poppy! I love your enthusiasm to share your learning and this Limerick poem is very funny. Can you check your school emails please. Next steps would be to add in some capital letters and full stops to the appropriate places in your poem. For example 'Once' needs a capital letter and you could put a full stop after 'wings'. Keep up the active blogging!

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  2. Fantastic rhyme Poppy, I really like this limerick about the bee. I see Miss Whysall has pointed out the capital at the start, you have used the capital perfectly for his name, Bings, which is great. I hope you had fun writing it?

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  3. loved it poppy it was soooooooooo good and funny and very catchy I hop you make more blog you later 🐶😂

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